Jerry and Rich dig into craft and momentum this week. Jerry radically rewrites Chapter 1—cutting 1,356 words to “start in the action” at the will-reading—and shares how he’ll weave those cut beats back in through interviews with conflicting POVs.
He also fixes a key scene using spatial sequence synesthesia (SSS) the right way and talks golf, APBA football, and why “body at the end of Ch. 2” now lands faster.
Rich is ~75% through his Snowflake-to-scenes outline (≈45 scenes) for Novel November, estimates an ~80k mystery, and even puts down his first 400 words (aiming for 2,000/day). He also brings a few gems from life at the library: lost AirPods sleuthing, a Medicaid look-back story, and a wheelbarrow tire that went boom.
Meanwhile, Jerry’s “Card Catalog” writing app levels up: a streamlined Story Bible with AI context via OpenRouter (hello, librarian “Rose”), per-book character assignment, and next up—plotting that flows right into drafting. Tool talk includes WaveMaker’s typewriter mode, Dave Chesson’s new self-pub course, Scrivener/Atticus, ProWritingAid/Grammarly, and why “start late, end early” just works.
No spoilers for the work-in-progress—just nuts-and-bolts process, tools, and laughs.
00:00 Cold open, theme, & A-Team on in the background
01:30 Weekly stats & why Jerry cut 1,356 words from Ch. 1
05:15 “Start late, end early” scene surgery (and moving clues into interviews)
10:40 Faster body reveal & fixing SSS (spatial sequence synesthesia) authentically
14:40 Jerry’s DIY “Card Catalog” app—AI Story Bible, OpenRouter, per-book casting
24:30 Tool talk: WaveMaker, Scrivener, Atticus, ProWritingAid, Grammarly
27:00 Rich’s 45-scene outline, 2k/day goal, first 400 words down
36:30 Library life & tech tidbits: AirPods tracking, look-back lesson, tire blowout
45:30 Golf 83, APBA football, and schedule for the week
1:03:30 Goals: halfway through edits; Rich’s Novel November push
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WaveMaker (typewriter mode)
Scrivener, Atticus, ProWritingAid, Grammarly
Kindlepreneur / Dave Chesson – new self-publishing course
OpenRouter – for Jerry’s AI librarian “Rose”
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